DEFINITION PARAGRAPH
Step 1
1. What is cincin ?
2. What is distinguishes between cincin and the other cake ?
3. Why do you think cincin so popular in central kalimantan ?
Step 2
1. Topic sentence : one of the popular cake in central kalimantan is cincin
2. Soppurting sentece
1. The dictionary definition of cincin does not make sound as jawellry
2. The dictionary defines cincin as " cake made in central kalimantan"
3. Concluding sentence : the cincin's cake is so familiar in kalimantan because it has good taste.
Step 3
Cincin
One of the popular cake in central kalimantan is cincin. The dictionary definition of cincin does not make sound as jewellery. The dictionary defines cincin as "cake made in central kalimantan". anyone who has tasted this delicious cake know that this defintion is too brown sugar to deescribe cincin. it is true that cincin is cake. It often calls wadai cincin. The cincin's material is predominantly used rice flour , coconut and brown sugar . dough making also takes a long time of about eight hours and after that the dough is shaped like rings and fried . this cake , including the type wet's cake , have a hard texture of the outside but if you've bitten it gently so. it tastes sweet , slightly salty continue crisp so it is difficult anyway want to tell more how it feels. . it has a reddish brown color that symbolizes courage. The cincin's cake is so familiar in kalimantan because it has good taste.
cincin : a cake made of rice flour and brown sugar
jewelry : objects such as rings and necklaces that people wearas decoration
brown sugar : derived from coconut , sago palm , and sugar cane
dough : mixture of flour, water, etc
courage : ability to face danger, pain etc, withoutshowing fear
Tifah, please pay attention about Capital in your writing. You still do the same mistakes in your task. It is about Capital alfabet. After you finished to write a sentence and add punctuation “.” Please write with Capital alfabet in the first word. Then, if you want to write named of place, street, location, country,etc .
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good but your paragrah don't use transition signals example first, second, third, fourth, etc
BalasHapusi think enough my correction. :)
Please look at the word which after full stop, you can get that many mistakes in your mistakes. you didn't use capital alfabet for it
BalasHapusPlease look at the word which after full stop, you can get that many mistakes in your mistakes. you didn't use capital alfabet for it
BalasHapus