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DEFINITION PARAGRAPH
Step 1
1. What is Manaqib ?
2. What are the benifit of Manaqib ?
3. Why do you think Manaqib so popular in Kalimantan ?
step 2
1. Topic sentence : Manaqib is one of the tradition in Kalimantan
2. Sopputing sentence :
1. The definition of Manaqib is researching and digging.
2. In terms interpreted as containing a person's life history of cultivation in attitudeis commaendable, noble moral and in others that should be made as teaching role models.
3. Concluding Sentence : I think Manaqib has many benifit for a muslim people.
1. What is Manaqib ?
2. What are the benifit of Manaqib ?
3. Why do you think Manaqib so popular in Kalimantan ?
step 2
1. Topic sentence : Manaqib is one of the tradition in Kalimantan
2. Sopputing sentence :
1. The definition of Manaqib is researching and digging.
2. In terms interpreted as containing a person's life history of cultivation in attitudeis commaendable, noble moral and in others that should be made as teaching role models.
3. Concluding Sentence : I think Manaqib has many benifit for a muslim people.
FIRST DRAFT
Manaqib
Manaqib is one of the tradition in Kalimantan. The definition of Manaqib is researching and digging.In
terms interpreted as containing a person's life history of cultivation
in attitudeis commaendable, noble moral and in others that should be
made as teaching role models. The purpose of the Manaqib are aimed tawasul , tabaruk, knowing the righteous people and to be more love. Manaqib it is widely available in the Al-Qur'an such as Ashabul Kahf's Manaqib, King Dzulqarnain's Manaqib and others. Imam Junaidi Al Baghdadi said " The tale of the story of the pious was a soldier of the army of Allah. Where
God set the hearts of His beloved with the stories. In the book of
Al-Ma'ani Jawahir explained about some of the benifit read Manaqib The first is to be given the spaciousness of luck and can hajj. The second is in order given Laduni science. aAnd then mate so quckly by Allah. I think Manaqib has many benifit for a muslim people.
Digging : Break up and move earth with a tool or machine, or
with hands, paws, snout, etc.
Interpreted : an action, mood, or way of behaving
Cultivation : he process of trying to acquire or develop a quality
yours is good, but I get some sentenxe there is a problem. That's this sentence "In the book of Al-Ma'ani Jawahir explained about some of the benifit read Manaqib The first is to be given the spaciousness of luck and can hajj." in there is a word "read" I think you should gerund.
BalasHapusyours is good, but I get some sentenxe there is a problem. That's this sentence "In the book of Al-Ma'ani Jawahir explained about some of the benifit read Manaqib The first is to be given the spaciousness of luck and can hajj." in there is a word "read" I think you should gerund.
BalasHapusyour paragraph is good but you must edit before your publish in before concluding sentence it is and not aAnd. and than be better if you use transition signal first, second etc. ok thanks. sorry if i have mistakes in my comment.
BalasHapusI think it's a good paragraph. In your paragraph writing, you was explained many things about "Manaqib". So, as a reader I got more knowledge about that.
BalasHapus