Manaqib
Manaqib is one of the tradition in Kalimantan.
The definition of Manaqib is researching and digging.In terms
interpreted as containing a person's life history of cultivation in attitudeis
commaendable, noble moral and in others that should be made as teaching role
models. The
purpose of the Manaqib are aimed tawasul , tabaruk, knowing the
righteous people and to be more love. Manaqib it is widely available in the Al-Qur'an such
as Ashabul Kahf's Manaqib, King Dzulqarnain's Manaqib and others. Imam Junaidi Al Baghdadi said " The tale of the
story of the pious was a soldier of the army of Allah. Where God set the hearts of His beloved with the stories.
In the book of Al-Ma'ani Jawahir explained about some of the benifit reading Manaqib The first is to be given the spaciousness of luck and
can hajj. The second is
in order given Laduni science. And then mate so quckly by Allah. I think
Manaqib has many benifit for a muslim people.
Digging : Break up and move earth with a tool
or machine, or with hands, paws, snout, etc.
Interpreted : an action, mood, or way of behaving
Cultivation : he process of trying to acquire or
develop a quality
Tifah, I think your paragraph so far so good. It is simple sentence with specifics information and definitions. But, I want to gives you some suggestions in your writing paragraph :)
BalasHapus1. The first, in the topic sentence is not correct. I think you need explain such as " Manaqib is what kind of tradition?
2. Second, I agree with your supporting sentences because there are you Explained many information,definitions and examples based on your topic. It is sufficiently.
3. Third, in the Concluding sentence concise overview of the topic and supporting sentences. Good
4. Your paragraph is coherence, eventhough you don't use transitional signals or signal word.
Happy Writing Tipung :)
the first i agree with indah comment and i think your paragraph is good because unity and coherence and i also agree with your supporting sentence and concluding sentence it's good definition and explanation but in topic sentence not perfect you can change one of popular custom in kalimantan is Manaqib and you don't use transition signal. and don't forget edit your paragraph before publication. and i hope my comment make your writing be better than before. i think enough and im sorry if i have mistakes in my comment. good luck tifah :)
BalasHapusyour paragraph is good information and explanation but be better if you add transition signals like first, second, third, etc and your paragraph unity and coherence.
BalasHapus